That's a great drawing of your girlfriend, but you should emphasize the nose a bit more.
你的女友这张画像很漂亮,但你应该把她的鼻子再勾画一下。
I know someone who always cuts sketches out from newspapers of model clothes that she would like to buy if she had the money.
我认识一个人,她总喜欢从报纸上剪下流行服装的图样,等以后有钱时去买服装。