Just make the few changes I suggested and your letter will be perfect!
只要改动我提到的个别地方，你的信就会很完美了。
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世界上最完美的对话之一（二）
📚 句中词汇解析
从本句中提取的重要词汇
adj. 完美的;正确的;优秀的;极好的;
n. [语]完成时;
💡 per全部+fect做→全部做完→完美的；完全的
"Everyone liked my father—he was the perfect gentleman."
大家都喜欢我父亲—他是真正的君子。
近义：improve, purify, refine, upgrade, better, meliorate
反义：incomplete, bad, sketchy, unaccomplished, uncompleted, unfinished
n. 信;证书，许可证;字母，文字;字面意义;
vt. 用字母标明;写字母于;加标题;
vi. 写印刷体字母;
"a letter of accreditation"
一份合格证明书
近义：label, mark, docket, missive, note, epistle